Business writing 101.
∙ Shorten your sentences.
∙ Make your point fast.
∙ Shorten the introduction.
∙ Use simple words.
∙ Add graphs and statistics.
∙ No buzzwords.
∙ Use more periods, fewer commas.
∙ Write for skimming, not deep reading.
∙ Bold the main takeaways.
Seinfeld divides writing and editing into two separate activities.
It's like he's switching between two modes of being. The creation phase is a delirious dance of action and exuberance, while the editing phase is slow… calm… and peaceful.
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If you're serious about adding style to your writing, diversify your vernacular.
In your first draft, write like you talk. But in the following drafts, add color to your writing by using words that people know, but don't say.
Here's my mini-essay.